The line graph illustrates average temperature over the year in London, New York and Sydney, while the table gives informations of total annual hours of sunshine in those cities.
Overall, it is clearly seen that people in South hemisphere can enjoy the most stable as well as the highest average temperature, however, people in New York have the highest number of total sunshine hours. In terms of stability, weather is more stable in the South hemisphere than in the North hemisphere.
City dwellers in Sydney can enjoy the most stable weather over the year, while average temperature differs only about 10 degrees over the year (just under 25 degrees and slightly above 15 degrees). Cities in the North hemisphere (London and New York) have a similar pattern, however, weather is more friendly to people in New York than in London, when in summer, in July, temperature peaking to just under 30 degrees as compare to nearly 25 degrees. In contrast, while temperature in the North hemisphere is highest between June and July (between 20 and 30 degrees), people down-under have the lowest average temperature (between 15 and 20 degrees).
As for a total number of sunshine hours, inhabitants in New York can enjoy sun in 2,535 hours a year, while in people in Sydney can have a joy from the sun just 52 hours less as compare to New York. Although, in London, sun is shining only 1,180 hours a year.
- The take below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. 78
- The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. 78
- Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t.Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion. 89
- The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. 73
- International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e a joy from the sun just 52 hours less as compare to New York. Although, in Londo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, as for, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81742738589 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51472138131 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435684647303 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.799221448 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.125 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.125 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204983283431 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104665911827 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875769960348 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155980700008 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910933697716 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.