Traditionally, a society is a group of people sharing cultural aspects such as language, dress and norms of behavior. People in a society are often known to share common interest or similar ideals. However, a society in a broader perspective can include aggregates of different groups which may differ in many aspects and activities. Although, cultural values are easily seen in homogeneous or nucleated area, major cities of any given society fully present its divergence. Therefore, to understand a society, one must look at its major cities.
Experts who attempts to study a society, does so not only to understand its present state but also predict changes that may occur in the future. Major cities are known to present an eclectic blend of the different aspect of a community; offering a handful of indicators for a comprehensive study. Generally, urban areas are largely populated with people from different backgrounds and ethnicity. For instance, Lagos city in Nigeria is popularly called "no man's land": although located in the southwestern region of the country, it is home to different tribes across the nation. Various collection of arts, music, lifestyle, fashion, religion among others are easily noticeable in every corner of this mega city. Setting such as this will better present an understanding of the unity, peaceful coexistence and tolerance among the different parts within a given society.
While some may argue that major cities in the world, be it in France or Rome are alike in every aspect especially in terms of social infrastructure; they fail to consider that the pace at which a given society develops is entrenched in its core values. This in itself provides a better means for comparison between similar institutions across major cities of the world. Largely, urban areas present an outlook of the economic characteristic of a given society more than rural area. It is a hub for business men, industrialist and a large pool of scholarly individuals seeking career opportunities. Government policies on development can therefore be safely formulated based on trends in the major cities.
In conclusion, it may seem appalling that the intrinsic traits in a society are largely located in rural area which reveals homogeneity, cities present a broader perspective to understanding the characteristics of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing the characteristics of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01995025713 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6666007579 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.352941176 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137847698366 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483510450113 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530336429745 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913868876697 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110097004405 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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