Some people prefer to live in the villages and some in the cities.Discuss both the styles of living and give your preference?
In the moderization era, today are eqaul dwellers are live in village area and city area. I think, both areas are play a vital role in their life. There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
In sophisticated era, nowadays, all people use the telecommunication like laptop,computer and cell phone etc. Afterthat, in my mind, government provide the equal requirement to all the citizens. Hence, there are no doubt, cities person are full depend on the village areas dwellers. Because it is essential reasons. For instance, farming work are umpteen indispensable in their life. But, farmer is very diligent work and village people are full depart himself. Otherwise, they have very obligation in their work.
To trigger with, there is no doubt, today are equal
Fullfill needs to all the areas. In my point of view, i think same proprotion to village area and cities. Furthermore, few years age, today are technology is very fast. They are very beneficial in the human life. Then, education play a vital role in human life. Last but not the least, they are plenty needs to require the government for same ratio to the society. For instance, medical, hospitals,schools and unversities so on.
In summarise, after alaysing that issue reckon, in point of view, today village area are umpteen development in the societies.Then, it is not matter. They should will live in cities area and village area. In my veiw, they are equal provide needs the dwellers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, for instance, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01195219124 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85263415577 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521912350598 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7021872273 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.9047619048 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9523809524 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.61904761905 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960501367793 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027426940285 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381530126054 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540002996114 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377380585471 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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