This is communication age and it is so easy for everyone to be aware of events happening around the world. Because of this simplicity, people are eager to know everything which occur in the earth and this is the reason of developing of news. Nowadays everyone has a communicated tool and could easily understand about the world. Though, they misery events are spread as soon as possible and causes the sadness and unhappiness to the people, I am of the same opinion with this claim that it is important for everyone to know about events happening around the world, but there is some truth in the argument that some misery and unlikely events will affect daily life.
First of all, the development of people directly related to know about the development of the others. This will encourage and motivate people to do something to progress and could help us to determine our way of life. For instance, a friend of mine, which was a business man, wanted to develop his business but didn’t know how. He started searching in the other country, the same business how got developed. Now he has a developed business and this is the result of knowing about the events occur around the world.
Second, the equality increases and the people which are in risk will be saved by spreading of information about the events. In some country sometimes tormented events occur and people sustain a loss and damage. After spreading the news in the world the other strong and reach country will helps this country. We were witness of tsunami in Indonesia, people loss everything and many people died and many people were about to die, but the help of reach people from other country helps them to survive.
Third, the cruel and injustice which happening in some country on minority will decrease. If an injustice thing happens in an area, in some country people will stand and do something to convince that country or international community to avoid this cruel. Myanmar is the best example for this which after many demonstrations of other country stopped.
In the long run, it is more important for everyone to know about the events happening around the world. Because it effects our life. However, sometimes it could affect negatively but, we have to avoid the spreading of misery events for happiness of the people.
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. 60
- In some countries teenager have jobs while they are still students. Do you think it is a good idea? Support your opinion by specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. 60
- in some countries teenagers have jobs while they are still students. do you think this is a good idea? 70
- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...the other strong and reach country will helps this country. We were witness of tsunam...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om other country helps them to survive. Third, the cruel and injustice which hap...
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the events happening around the world. Because it effects our life. However, sometimes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, third, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84343434343 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51893654591 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44696969697 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5070449871 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.947368421 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223315660788 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771195508311 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699314387282 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135309705363 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729274746536 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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