TPO 46.
There is a controversy between author and lecturer about whether it is beneficial for United States to use electronic forms of medical record systems or it is better to use the traditional paper works. The reading passages provides three benefits of using electronic form; however, the lecture refutes all of them.
The first benefit mentioned by the author is that by using electronic system, the need for collecting a huge amount of paper records will be eliminated which will result in reduction in the cost. Also, the doctors can easily transfer and duplicate records with no need to copy machines and faxing. In contrast, the lecturer mentions that the doctors who use the electronic system still need the papers for doing their legal and necessary signature. So, using electronic devices will not eliminate the need for papers and its matters.
Second, the reading claims that using electronic manner will reduce the probable errors which are made by illegible handwriting, improper transcription of data, and nonstandard organization of papers. On the contrary, the professor says that doctors always use the papers for writing the report of the patients even they use electronic system, and it is usually the duty of their staff to translate the information form papers to electronic device; therefore, using those devices will not prevent man made mistakes.
Finally, the article states that electronic records facilitate the scientist’s research because they are easy to access. On the contrary, the lecturer mentions that it is difficult to access the patient's information because of the privacy law, and the researchers need permissions to access them, and there is no guaranty for those permits.
- TPO 28 78
- TPO 35 3
- TPO 32 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole 85
- TPO 29 68
- TPO 27' agree/disagree. If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...ions that it is difficult to access the patients information because of the privacy law,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 273.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31868131868 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76257024075 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0067420799 49.2860985944 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.2 110.228320801 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06452816374 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395623827843 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16555440381 0.0996497079465 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590350637693 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235360832343 0.162205337803 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384873149896 0.0443174109184 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.8541721854 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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