You recently organized an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel, in their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch . Write the letter to the manager of the hotel, in your letter.
Say what the participants liked about the hotel
Explain why they were unhappy about food
Suggest what should managar do to improve the food in future
Dear Sam,
I am John, one of your regular corporate clients from ABC Ltd. I intend to write this letter to share the feedback of my colleagues against yesterday’s meeting. We have been conducting different sessions and seminars at your hotel and I must say, experience has always been quite satisfactory.
Starting with the general feedback, all the attendees liked the environment, all the required equipments for meeting were available such as writing pads, pens, projector for presentation. Since it was a full day workshop so seating was expected to be comfortable and your team did not disappoint in this regard as well. However, I am afraid, people did not enjoy lunch at all. Food was served cold and dishes were not filled in time. Furthermore, some food items were bland to taste particularly fish. BBQ dishes were not properly cooked.Very few dishes were served in buffet and no dessert was available after main course.
It was a corporate lunch and expectations were quite high. For future reference, I suggest you to improve your serving time. Make sure that in corporate events like yesterday; appetizers, main course and dessert are served in precedence. Looking forward to your positive response on this.
Yours Sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sam, I am John, one of your regular corporate...
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...ed equipments for meeting were available such as writing pads, pens, projector fo...
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...day; appetizers, main course and dessert are served in precedence. Looking forwar...
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...ive response on this. Yours Sincerely, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, such as, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1568627451 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8491822147 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6588268733 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1428571429 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292163077608 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856089781223 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517022759199 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171264915364 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060250365577 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.