Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
Explain the why the center is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closed.
Dear Sir,
In intend to write this letter to grab your attention to an important concern. It is heard that the sports center situated in our area is going to be shutdown. I would like to tell you that all community residents strongly oppose this idea as this center is the only entertainment place for the families living here. The center is always crowded with families living nearby, where they spend quality time with their kids and elders. This center provides certain leisure services under one roof such as fine-dining, play area for toddlers and sports club for youngsters.
I would like to assert my point that demolishing the sports center will be detrimental. As this place provides an opportunity to all the residents to mingle up and extend their social circle. Furthermore, this place also provides affordable luxury to most of the salaried class families here, who cannot afford to go to expensive play areas and restaurant every week.
This sports center also paves ways for good sportsperson of this community by recommending them to official sports teams such as national cricket and football selection teams. This decision will close the opportunity door for talented children of this area. This place is not only visited by young people but also retired people meet here every day, where they enjoy their evening tea and watch children playing. Therefore, please review this matter and revert your decision.
Yours Truly,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The proper name in singular (In) must be used with a third-person verb: 'intends'.
Suggestion: intends
Dear Sir, In intend to write this letter to grab your atten...
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Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oor for talented children of this area. This place is not only visited by young peop...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and revert your decision. Yours Truly, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07949790795 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48240248312 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606694560669 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3106307001 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3846153846 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164145667251 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712726390393 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455324284264 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10905786916 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063496800585 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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