Few people, from different countries belives that women can perform as much as men and they are able to work in police and army, while others oppose the statement. Here we can deal with both aspects of the matter in detail.
In modern world people are concerned about gender equality and women empowerment. Those who are worried about the rights and responsibilities of women, feels that, she should be considered equally in all aspects, even in jobs requiring physical effort. Women has reached to all area of exellence nowadays, ranging from shef to nuclear scientists and astronauts. According to the supporters, she has got all kind of education and training in variety of area besides, have knowledge and skills in performing all activities hence, might be valued equally.
On the other hand opposition argues that, it is difficult to compare both genders because of physical stength and other reasons. Females can't perform manual labours as much as men do, it will effect their body and possibly will encounter difficulties such as back pain. As a police officer or army man, some time females will fail in terms of performing operations and fighting with thieves. There are a lot of security issues for women in these work areas.
From my side, I will be in the second part; I don't think that it will be good for the government and the worker as it will not suit for ladies. Thery should be parallel to men in many fields but in case of defence purposes it won't suit. There are many laws for gender equality, which should be carried out, at the same she should select the job wisely.
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. 22
- The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. 67
- Young people who commit serious crimes such as a rubbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
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...both aspects of the matter and detail. In modern world people are concerned abo...
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...ities hence, might be valued equally. On the other hand opposition argues that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, second, so, while, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74100719424 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4874614403 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6371376058 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257170193767 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825747495014 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04239754245 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135005509669 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227820652619 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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