You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Thank you friend for the holiday
2. Explain that you left your wallet in their house
3. give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Johnny,
It was a great pleasure to spend holiday with your family. Thanks for your efforts and time to host us. I’m glad to invite you to come over my house on upcoming holiday.
Anyway, did you notice my wallet in your place? My wallet has been left at your accommodation and this was being noticed when I got back to my home. I suppose that I may accidentally drop it in the bathroom after taking shower but please help me to have a look in your place.
If you manage to find the wallet, you can send it directly to my home from the post. My home address is 121, 41st Street, Botahtaung Township, Yangon and the postage cost will be around $1.2 - $2 which will be refunded when we meet again.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you and hope you can find my wallet.
Your Friend,
Yan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and the postage cost will be around .2 - which will be refunded when we meet agai...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, look, may, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 666.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20840820396 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693333333333 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.118189611 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402676027884 0.216113520407 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17308184362 0.0766984524023 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887869183185 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228923425803 0.12726935374 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392440324228 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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