Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as cell phone) or service (eg. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
Many believe that money comes first whilst buying a product or taking a service, whether it is a mobile phone or a hospital treatment. In my opinion, price plays a major role to decide the quality of payback received.
Firstly, it is true to the fact globally that price becomes the prime consideration deciding the kind of product or service we get at the receiving end. The world market has become so competitive that leading manufacturing brands keep their market share by providing a range of technological levels of produces at different respective prices to fit the pocket of different sectors of the society. This helps even a layman to choose technical products like cellular phones looking just at their prices they are sold at. Hence the cost of products finally decides the type and quality of things and one can easily make a pick from the numerous availabilities just looking at the pricing.
Secondly, having an organized and highly professional sector today, everything comes with a price tag. Take, for example, highly skilled doctors, sophisticated medical equipment and facilities at a super-speciality hospital, which eventually bears a good amount of cost on it. Evidently, we cannot even think of getting those finest qualities services without taking into account the money it consumes. In other words, it is always a linear equation that the more liberal your budget is, the better the services you are having entitled to get back.
In conclusion, my opinion is that nothing comes free of cost in a competitive capitalist market and price tag defines the final word on a product or service. Here, we can ensure a comfortable and steady life by properly planning, budgeting and spending according to the cost of maintaining our standard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...just at their prices they are sold at. Hence the cost of products finally decides th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07903780069 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83727289836 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632302405498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6597515368 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141188729419 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502164205419 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313932175381 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815576564684 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292987582279 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.