You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Smith,
Hope you are doing well. I'm writing this letter to let you know that I have recently relocated to Brampton.
As you are aware that my old home was a studio flat and it couldn't accommodate more than two people. Moreover, my parents will be on a visit to Canada next month and they have planned to stay with me for a couple of days. Hence, I thought to buy a bigger house for everyone's comfort.
Furthermore, my house is located near to the public transport as well as it is surrounded by parks for elderly people. It's a two storey villa with all the amenities like a pool and a private garden at the backyard. Also, all the five bedrooms have balconies attached to it because of which there is good ventilation in the house.
I'll soon be organizing a house warming party for all my well-wishers and you are cordially invited to the party. Please do come along with your family and I'm sure your kids will enjoy the breathtaking view of the sea from my house.
I will look forward to seeing you soon.
Best regards,
Jessica
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Dear Smith, Hope you are doing well. Im writing this letter to let you know tha...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...at my old home was a studio flat and it couldnt accommodate more than two people. Moreo...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...surrounded by parks for elderly people. Its a two storey villa with all the ameniti...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...re is good ventilation in the house. Ill soon be organizing a house warming part...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ease do come along with your family and Im sure your kids will enjoy the breathtak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, look, moreover, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43660952395 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.258818816 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191775796757 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064563891201 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065708408948 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114541651139 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707054383835 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.