You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letterexplain why you have moveddescribe the new houseinvite your friend to come and visit

Dear Maggi,

I am writing you this letter concerning my new accommodation i recently moved to last month. you would be very amazed i moved out but there are certain reason that prompted my decision.
Due to the fact that i got a new job , i discovered that the distance from my new job to my old apartment is quite far . Most times i got held in traffic and arrive late at home which was not convenient for me. my new apartment is closer, convenient and located in a conducive environment .
further more my new home is very beautiful its a three bedroom flat is very spacious and comfortable . The living room is very lovely and well furnished , designed with attractive well paper. My furniture are Italian made and very comfortable. My kitchen has all the modern kitchen utensil that made cooking fun and easy . All the bedroom are suit.
In addition i will love you to come visit me and see things your self.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57171680025 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648484848485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5605055862 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 81.0 2.54639175258 3181% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135725124406 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517527463392 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716668300215 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108646407323 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853380057994 0.0580467560999 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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