Some people believe that to become the vegetarian is the only way to keep healthy. Do you agree or disagree?
The awareness of a healthier lifestyle has made numerous people alter their dietary habits. While I concede that eating only fruits and vegetables is associated with a few benefits for one’s health, I would contend that there are also other factors play prindispensable roles in improving human health.
On the one hand, there are two compelling reasons as to why those who avoid the intake of meat, to some extent, can keep their health. From the perspective of elderly people, a vegetarian diet helps them reduce the risk of chronic diseases such as hypertension, diabetes. This is because when there are not any foods made from meat in their meals, they can refrain from excessive intakes of sugar, fat, and calorie which are the main culprits of health problems among older generation. In terms of youngsters, eating fruits and vegetables can provide them with a great way to improve their physical health. A clear explanation is that when young people have a habit of eating the plenty of these foods, they can be supplied with enough nutrients and vitamins that may help them keep fit.
On the other hand, I am firmly convinced that the vegetarian is not only and best strategy to guarantee/ensure health. Firstly, strengthening physical condition and endurance is also a commendable way. To explain, the habit of doing physical activities may help people relax their bodies and ease their mind, which may lead to an improvement in both physical and mental health. Secondly, achievement work-life balance is another way to ensure one’s health index in the modern world. The reason for this is that nowadays people usually have to face fierce competition and huge pressure deriving from either study or work, that may undermine their health.
In conclusion, I accept that the dietary exerts some positive effects on people health condition such as mitigating some serious diseases of older people and enhancing the physique of young people. However, I would argue that regular sports activities and improving the balanced in life are other factors that may guarantee health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...one's health, I would contend that there are also other factors play prindispensable roles in i...
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Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'help'?
Suggestion: help
...ve of elderly people, a vegetarian diet helps them reduce the risk of chronic disease...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12573099415 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66963547934 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0262915765 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.214285714 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129403565019 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483348109664 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320080968454 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814912307601 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212303862959 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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