Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, the governments pay some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
In some countries, children education is supported partly or all education fees by government. While this may cause some negative consequences, I believe that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
It is true that paying education fees for children brings potential problems for this country. Firstly, many social services will not be taken care of by the government. All of vital services will not be subsidized by the government to serve citizen. Quality services are dangerous in decreasing strongly. Furthermore, some taxpayers who have no children will feel unfair because they have to pay tax yearly for the government to support other people’s children.
On the other hand, when the government provides education tuition for children, several positive impacts can be anticipated. The children are the future of a country. Therefore, investing for education is at a top priority. As a result, illiteracy rate may decrease rapidly because the government pay education fee instead them. The more investment for education we make, the better workforce in the future we have. Moreover, a large of money is saved to spend on better nutrition and health care for children than before.
In conclusion, spending nation budget on education for children have some potential drawbacks, I believe that the advantages is greater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45192307692 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99813489854 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6837046896 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339343140538 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112883724616 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958049237573 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238603906623 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117942055755 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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