It is an obvious truth that the rate of flock who are inclined to utilize supplement treatments are enhancing by passing time.
This essay deals with the arguments for and against this controversial topic.
On the one hand, there are a huge number of items that can be mentioned as advantages. The most crucial thing is related to being less harmful in comparison to chemical medicines. In other words, they benefit from less side effects. Secondly, complementary medicines are more accessible and there is no need to be prescribed. Thirdly, it can be considered as an appropriate option for people who can not afford the expenses of expensive modern cures. So, it is preferable for some parts of society.
On the other hand, disadvantages of consuming alternative medication can not be neglected. There are some demerits that is going to be debated. In spite of the public beliefs, sometimes, it come up with the unassailable results . For example, one of my friends, who was not aware of negative side of a particular plant which was using, has expired. Therefore, it seems barely reliable. Others are totally opposed to these kind of treatment, strongly believe it has no scientific basement and it is not proved by all physicians.
In conclusion, there are a lot of pros and cons related to alternative medicines and treatments like herbal therapies, acupuncture, acupressure and so forth. Adapt on the above mentioned points, it seems like a good idea to have them under some circumstances. What I am trying to utter is, the permission of your doctor is crucial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99619771863 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96474540815 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1325324399 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2941176471 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0907439651947 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273313600183 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240365673129 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477114577485 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307526798101 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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