Compare yourself today and yourself five years ago. in what ways are you the same or different? use specific example to support your response
I am a kind of person who believes that each day brings something new in life and as much as we proceed further in life, that much we gain experience and get a chance to learn new things. According to me, i am not the same one that was five years ago.
The main difference in me today is my confidence level. Five year I am very shy and always felt uncomfortable to talk to someone and, do not like social gathering and today, I am very confident person and always join each and every conversation and, now even initiate conversation and, also Today I am more social than before.People who knows me think that i am praiseworthy person because i changed my dramatically.
Five year ago, I am not able to speak English because I have done my studies in Hindi which is my native language but today, I can speak English much better than before and, also living in English speaking country.
The most important change that I always feel in me is my way of thinking. Five years ago my thinking is narrow and do not even know how to solve problem. Despite of, have been grown up in a very conservative family, today my way of thinking is tremendously change.
So, these are some changes that I see in myself and, great thing is all changes are positive and in ascending order that is why I feel proud on myself. As someone said that “you learn from your experience”, it is totally true.
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i am praiseworthy person because i changed my dramatically.
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