Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the food of this restaurant. In fact, my coworkers and I always have our meal here and we were pleased with the foods and waiters as well. We have always been treated the best way.
Unfortunately, on 28 July, I had a crucial appointment on my office and I did not want to take a risk and try a new one. So, I decided to have a lunch in this well known restaurant. Actually, I was expecting for the best as always but I got really shocked when the food was tasted. To tell the truth, it was so salty and the steak, in spite of our order, which was totally baked, was raw. In addition, the behaviour of the staffs was extremely catastrophic.
I am going to ask you for paying more attention to customers demands if you want to preserve them with the most satisfaction. Also, hiring more educated staffs must be considered.
I would be thankful if you could give your immediate attention to this matter. I look forward hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
FATEMEH BAGHERI.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have lunch'.
Suggestion: have lunch
...isk and try a new one. So, I decided to have a lunch in this well known restaurant. Actually...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, really, so, well, as to, in addition, in fact, in spite of, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55729166667 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7164891222 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630208333333 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7771455963 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3076923077 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242676469084 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715238346245 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519397642479 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135920125971 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219456134524 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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