it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music,and others are not. However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sports and Music are field which, increasing day by day in the world. But all children can not play any sports or any musical instruments without talent. So, it is commonly believe that some pupil are born with some specific skills. On the other hand, it is claimed that any children play sports or any musical equipment with hard work and become a good sportsman or musician. However, this essay shall analyze both perspectives. I, personally believe that hard work and more practices is a essential part for do any type of work.
To begin with, sports man and musician think that all children are born with some different skills or talents. So, they can do easily this type of things and easily learn. Therefore, they recognize their talent and use this talent in any field ,which is related to this talent. for instance, All singers have talent for singing. So, They can easily sing any song with great voice.
on the other side, Some person become great sports man and musician by hard work as well as more and more practices. Those person has not talent for do any type of work. They learn this skills with exercise and workout. such as, Some sports man has interest in football but they are very good in cricket because of hard work and practices. Thus, hard work is most important part for do any type of work in any sector.
To recapitulate, all the people have to do combine their talent and their hard work or grater exercises for success in their life or any field in their future with great fame.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
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Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'Those people', 'Those persons'?
Suggestion: This person; Those people; Those persons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60147601476 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20604960638 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457564575646 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7654798678 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3529411765 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296779379803 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110960802132 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672485347937 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191508502991 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917583249512 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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