Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Rinki Gupta, I am having to write this letter to express my willingness to purchase some products from your electrical shop "Khanna Electricals" as I have heard a lot about the quality you provide to your customers. I am residing in an isolated area and don't get enough time to visit your place so I would like to order some items through this letter.
First of all, 5 different coloured light bulbs, 2 ceiling fans, 1 stabilizer for a refrigerator and 1 multi-plug board are the goods I require till next month December. Kindly revert if the products are available with you or these can be ordered. Additionally, if the mentioned products will work fine afterwards, there are more than 10 appliances that I need to order for my home as I have just shifted to a new place.
So, you are requested to reply with the cost of all these products and their availability in your showroom so that the unavailable items can be arranged from some other store. Also, any catalogue for the products with their prices in the revert would be appreciable.
I look forward for a positive response from your side.
Yours sincerely,
Rinki Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... I am residing in an isolated area and dont get enough time to visit your place so ...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e for the products with their prices in the revert would be appreciable. I look forward f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77450980392 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83528326958 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6953961999 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161341518512 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600952241638 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385326652824 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844361798956 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050735534138 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.