A problem of modern society is the declining level of health in the general population. Although certain people argue that providing more sports facilities to encourage people are beneficial, others including me say not appropriate solely. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay.
Most people claim that increasing the number of sports facilities can be useful for a healthy society. Availability of sports Centre can make a situation that anyone can do exercise without considering factors such as the cost of traveling, hire guides. On the many instances, membership price of sports centers is so high that the middle-class person is unable to afford them for the longer period. According to the various surveys, it has been found that 70 percent of gym members do not continue because of high subscription fees. In conclusion, constructing sports facilities will ease this situation.
The opponent of this belief that there are several solid reasons why the public needs other sources along with sports facilities. It is undeniable that the percentage of society comprises of people of different age-group right from infants to seniors, it is not possible to ensure the participation of all of them in sports. Also the number of people in the entire world unaware about healthy manner. There are several statistics which are suffering from a majority health problem like pressure blood, obesity and so on. As a result, establish the center of health to improve the level of healthy life is significant in sideway sports equipment.
By way of conclusion, the challenge for both sides is to produce solid evidence focusing on sports facilities. People should be encouraged not only to have more physical activities but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20069204152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80958630731 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.309803486 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242189895367 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719008396476 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466620945315 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138735055022 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512825813557 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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