More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time in
Communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building
Houses.
Why? Who benefit from this, the community or these young people?
In the modern age some countries live in poverty and some young people from wealthy countries do the help of the poor nation by unpaid work presenting my view I would intend to explore the aforementioned view in following paragraphs.
One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that young people take the gap a year for helping the lower countries. There are probably a number of factors involved why they help the poor nation. The chief cause might be that simultaneously young young people are more likely to help the other people. As a consequence they have feel of kindness. Whereas watch the news in television condition of a poor nation they tend to be deprived by their homes some time people houses are damaged by natural calamities. For instance, after the nuclear explosion in japan thousand of people deprived by homes and Indian people help the many people's.
However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of whether the younger help the poor nation they tend to be gain their experience of life and they make themselves aware about the poverty .Respectively, tiger airline make the volunteer group to help the poor nation and new houses are built by the younger people. As a consequence, these further development are being gained the graid of the nation. The most evident would be that whether they built the school or college and students earn the knowledge by the teacher because young people are more likely to be do the volunteer work.
To conclusion, although are are good reason but opinion voulnteer work is a boom and in this way we help the children reason behind could be that children is a future of tomorrow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: young
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e more likely to help the other people. As a consequence they have feel of kindnes...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
... the many peoples. However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of whether th...
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... make themselves aware about the poverty .Respectively, tiger airline make the vol...
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Suggestion: Respectively
...ake themselves aware about the poverty .Respectively, tiger airline make the volunteer group...
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...olunteer work. To conclusion, although are are good reason but opinion voulnteer work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78472222222 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55219434755 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2825741776 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.272727273 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214948199064 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855385943623 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803097203957 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13266563466 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833111639139 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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