International aid has played an important role between nations over the recent years. Many countries donate their necessities to other countries in order to create greater national relationship. In spite of the disadvantages it brings about, either of the nations could benefit from it. The opinion of the issue would be shed light on in the following paragraphs.
It is beneficial for the country which receives the donation such as medication, food, and other necessities from other country. For instance, developed countries often provide advanced medical resources for the under-developed countries. In this case, for the recipient, substantial improvement of the health state could be seen owing to the better medication. On the other hand, the countries which provide the aid would benefit on account of the fact that it establishes better relationship between two countries. This often alleviates the international collision since these under-developed countries tend to be politically instability.
Despite the fact that both countries could derive the advantage from the aid, there are drawbacks between the donator and recipient as well. The countries which provide the support often claim for unequal request. A case in point is that occidental nations request the receiving countries for petroleum as exchange condition on account of the fact that petroleum is scarce in the western area. In such circumstance, it is detrimental to certain under-developed countries as petroleum represents a valuable resource to them. Craving for the oil would cause the depletion of the petroleum in those under-developed countries.
By way of conclusion, as argued above, it is an undeniable that international aid is indispensable to the world. However, it also inflicts inequity between nations. It is imperative that authorities from predominant countries should reach an agreement to ensure the equity between any countries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well, for instance, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61092150171 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20413657086 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525597269625 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7740959688 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7058823529 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341152557524 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109526118839 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885750096678 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202067360406 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072980769969 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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