In June 1996, an experimental flu vaccine was tralled on females in a large county town.
The diagram, the pai chart and the graph highlights about an examination of flu vaccine which was tralled on ladies in a big country town.
We can see certain amounts of deaths on 1996. On thr daigram we can find that a huge number of females died against the male. On the other pai chart here is almost 24% babies or childreen died as well as near about 14% died without getting vaccine properly. On the other hand 35% of people who are over 65 years old have died and it is the highest amount of deeth. On this pai chart. Besides probably 28% died even they take into the hospital or receiving medical treatment. At last in the graph female are died more than male during March to December. In March, April we can see that exactly 1000 females as well as near about 1000 males died during this time. But we can see a rapid groth among May to August and a fallen amount which is shown on July to December.
At last, we can say females died most rather than male on the experiment of Flu vaccine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... died without getting vaccine properly. On the other hand 35% of people who are ov...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and it is the highest amount of deeth. On this pai chart. Besides probably 28% di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, may, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27894736842 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06772453788 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3857989308 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9090909091 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13310602452 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521215725558 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073857905394 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135887099306 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954558378372 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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