Do you think the place where a person grew up helps him/her in achieveing objectives in life? Do you agree or disagree?
The important of the place where a person grew up helps him/her in achieving objectives in life which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The susstantial influence of a person grew up in the same birth place will helpful has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of these tread in recent year. It can be agreed that a person who grow up in hometown helps to grow the physical and social development of people.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why the people grow up in a birth place is benificial to reached the goal but the most conspicious on stem's from the fact that people grow in a birth place helps to develop the mental and social status of peoples. As an illustration, a research conducted in charls universaty shows a student ranked the first position in cultural programme due to grow up in birth place. In addition, people grow in birth place helps to grow up interpersonal relationship and get a more knowledge about culture, custuoms and traditions. Thus, people grow in a same place where he born is very important for carrer and professional development.
Neverthless, there remains same drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of a person who is growing up in birth place helps to achive goals but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that person grow up in birth place do not know the culture, developing styel of orher country. For instance a people born and grow up in nepal he did not know the new technology invention in US.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of a people grow in birth place helps to achive his/her objectives is prominent a person born same place and grow up same place should be encourage to know others place new things which helps in psychological and carrer development.
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...ent year. It can be agreed that a person who grow up in hometown helps to grow th...
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... to grow up in birth place. In addition, people grow in birth place helps to grow...
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... culture, custuoms and traditions. Thus, people grow in a same place where he bor...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
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..., people grow in a same place where he born is very important for carrer and profes...
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Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
... place and grow up same place should be encourage to know others place new things which h...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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... grow up same place should be encourage to know others place new things which helps in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 318.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75786163522 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71965313813 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459119496855 0.580463131201 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8130069839 50.4703680194 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.3 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.9669160288 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259614058698 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126123087242 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901050985537 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190548517289 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874298379274 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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