We have entered a throw away society and fil the environment with rubbish. what are the cause and what are your solutions?
The important effect of we have entered a throw society and fill the environment with rubbish was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of we are not doing proper waste disposal in society has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of these treand on proper waste disposal in recent year. It can be agreed that people in the society are not doing waste proper management which may cause many communicable disease in society.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why people have entered throw away society and fill the surrounding with waste products but the most conspicious one steam's from the fact that due to unproper waste disposal it may harm to environment which may lead to air pollution. As an illustration, a current study shows in America ten people died due to air pollution in 2019. In adittion, due to unproper waste disposal it may harm to global warming. Thus, we should educate the people and demonstrate them how to do proper waste management.
Another key of justification for upholding this notion is that due to rubbish around our society it may harm to birds and other animals as well. For instance, we should put bin in the public area , for example, we can put dust bin in the middle of the park, in the shooping mall, in the school, bus and train stations etc. we can organize the programme for proper waste management in public.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of we are responsible for not maintaining proper waste disposal is prominent and we have to clean ourselves public area if we see any dirty iteams. we have to teach our children about how to collect our waste products and how to dumping it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76666666667 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59430363761 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6318581459 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226768651562 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815107078547 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812253549447 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136269216651 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489447372822 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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