Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give the advantages of each and support your viewpoint.
For many people learning a new language is a challenge. Some people learn a new language as a hobby, while others learn it for their career. When people need to learn a language for their career than it is better to learn in the country in which it is spoken.
Learning a language in the country in which it is spoken may be more efficient because you learn from native teachers. Also, you hear the language all the time and take a short time to get used to the new language. And after a short time, you can start to use the language in your daily activities. For instance, I went to Turkey to learn Turkish language and I learned from elementary to advanced in nine months. When I started it was very difficult for me because I did not understand anything and the teachers used to spoke just in Turkish. They did not want to speak in English because in that way it would be harder to get used to the Turkish language. They forced us all the time to speak and try to think in Turkish, not in our native language. This was thought to be very effective because thinking in the language we learn allow us to think like natives and to use their language rules while thinking in our native language and speaking in the language we used to learn we make more mistakes.
On the other hand, learning a language in your own country is cheaper than going abroad because you need to pay for traveling, accommodation, food, language course etc. While you are in your own country you do not have this extra costs, also you do not need to be far from your family. In addition, you learn from teachers who are native with your language and know how to teach you from the beginning in a simple way because they had also passed through this way of learning.
In my opinion, learning a new language in the country where it is spoken is a better way to learn because you are surrounded all the time with native speakers. But also you can achieve an intermediate level in your own country and then go to a foreign country to develop your language.
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- TOEFL TPO 05 - Integrated Writing Task 71
- Summarize the main points in the lecture, and then explain how they cast doubt on the ideas in the reading passage. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... in the country in which it is spoken. Learning a language in...
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...cause thinking in the language we learn allow us to think like natives and to use the...
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...used to learn we make more mistakes. On the other hand, learning a language i...
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...now how to teach you from the beginning in a simple way because they had also passed through th...
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...passed through this way of learning. In my opinion, learning a new language i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37994722955 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35917843296 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406332453826 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6412214314 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358267834444 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148405503348 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109133819199 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255980706793 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841476292495 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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