Scientists agree that many people are eating too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problems can be solved by educating people to eat less junk food. Other people believe that education will not work.
Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
it is certainly true that fast food is becoming popular today although it has negative consequences. Generally, it is believed by some people that educational system is effective to address the problem to not eat prepackaged food while other's argued.
To begin with, education is the most powerful weapons to solve all issues related with junk foods. As in educational centres, the teachers teach science subject to pupils and let them know about the perilous effects of dehydrated food. furthermore, the educators instruct to the learners to eat only healthy and hygienic food for the fitness and maintenance of their body. some schools even offer diet table to the students so that they can eat nutrient rich food and do not suffer from obesity and other health related problems. In this way, all the students would also impart knowledge among their parents to not cook convenient food.
On the contrary, some human beings argue that education is not effective much more to aware individuals about the risky effects of packaged food. As it is the primary responsibility of the parents to look after their children and give only healthy food instead of unhealthy cuisine. furthermore, the family members should give real life examples to their budding flower about those who are suffering from obesity and lose their personality. so that the blooming buds can understand the cons of unsafe food. As a result, they can concentrate to eat only nutritional food.
In conclusion, my personal prospective is that where it is the fundamental responsibility of parents to give healthy food to their teenagers, education could not be challenged which provide valuable information to all about the high risk effects of processed food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15602836879 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7562751064 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0173257619 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331178690429 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113726360717 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075696827561 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198483185103 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640506573784 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.