Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In the letter:
- Explain the reason for the noise;
- Apologize;
- Describe what action you will take.
Dear Ms or Mr Smith,
I am writing to you to apologize for the loudly noise that is disturbing you and forced you to notify me. Wasn’t my intention to upset the neighbourhood.
Let me explain in more details my situation. A few months back, me and my friends enrolled ourselves in a contest, in college, called Battle Band to compete among singers and performers for the winning prize: a thousand dollars. We got a lot of positive reactions and decided to give it a try on the musical industry. Since then, we were practicing to play in bars and events across town, and received a chance to play in Old Bar Alley, next to the sport centre in downtown next week.
However, in behalf of the member of the band, I apologize sincerely for all the noise and loud music, but we were rehearsing to play in this bar.
Would you kindly consider to wait until next week so we can find another place to practice? If not, we could go to one o four member’s house to play in his garage since the place is quieter and have few neighbours near by.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rafael
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ormers for the winning prize: a thousand dollars. We got a lot of positive reacti...
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Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...lace is quieter and have few neighbours near by. I look forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52450980392 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56714427318 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656862745098 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9723146153 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9090909091 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14979415708 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605001118251 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636430573285 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717647243136 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610737561058 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.