You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
First of all, I am writing to inform you about a problem that I recently discovered in my notebook.
I bought a notebook from your store six months ago and it was being announced as the most efficient, faster and highly recomended computer to execute all programs used by a gamer. Despite my doubts, I checked the information about it and got convinced that this was the best equipment to develop my work because I am a designer, so I work with a lot of heavy softwares.
However, on Monday, in this week, I was not able to use the keyboard fully. Some of the letters was not working when I pressed them. Being as good as new, the notebook should not do this and it is making me waste precious time because I will have to send a report for a new client by Saturday. This issue with computer must be solved sooner that the week end. On Tuesday I tryed to use your phone to give instructions on what to do, but I was hanging on the line for too long and gave up.
I would be grateful if you could send a technician to help me out and repair my keyboard until Thursday. If you could not send me someone, please, indicate the nearest shop that can fix him and I will deliver it myself right away.
Hopefully you will give the attention that this problem deserves.
Yours faithfully,
John John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, First of all, I am writing to inform you...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...was not able to use the keyboard fully. Some of the letters was not working when I pressed ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... problem deserves. Yours faithfully, John John
^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: John
...lem deserves. Yours faithfully, John John
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36693548387 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42050711807 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600806451613 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8417939201 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235449973026 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773983476909 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384178768793 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120841832325 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379749740852 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.