The graph below shows the four leading types of farming produce in Mitchford city between 1970-2000.
Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
19970-2000 years’ data regarding the production of four leading farming in Mitchford city is illustrated in the chart. Overall, the rates of wheat, corn and cotton were the same in 1970 and 2000.
In the beginning of period profit of wheat was approximately two times higher than cotton, 20 and 45 thousand dollars respectively. Then later, until 1982 cotton production remained the same, however after that it is picked so significantly that reached 90 thousand dollars in 1995. In production of corn there were also increase till 1985 and then it started to decrease and it showed 30 thousand dollars in 2000.
Even though there were difference for 20 thousand dollars in 1970’s in farming spheres like wheat and sugar, their production profit became almost the same by the end of the time. In about 1985’s three production: cotton, sugar and corn illustrated the same and it were approximately 36 thousand.
In short, though there was a very important increase in production of cotton till 1995, it went down so significantly and reached lowest point of that it had in 1970, 20 thousand dollars.
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profit of wheat was approximately two times higher than cotton
profit of wheat was approximately two times higher than that of cotton
Even though there were difference for 20 thousand dollars in 1970’s in farming spheres like wheat and sugar, their production profit became almost the same by the end of the time.
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