Everyone complains about taxes, yet think about what would happen if there were no longer an income tax. In a 250-word essay, discuss the positive effects of an income tax, the negative effects, or both.
The quote : “no certain things except death and taxes” illustrates that the taxes are really important. Nowadays, the taxes deal with all activities in the way of human life, especially income tax. I think that the income tax has both positive and negative effects. To describe them, detailed discussion is provided here.
In the aspect of advantages, many benefits of the income tax are given to several countries. First of all, the tax, which is levied on income of individuals or legal persons, is the main source of state’s budget. In order to provide all public services, the st...
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Sentence: Moreover, instead of spend their incomes for improving their family's life, they must divide some parts of money to pay income tax.
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