Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding the latest news that our community center is closing.
The Springfield Recreation Center has been an important part of my family history. I was raised by a single mother and she had to work seven days a week to support me and my sister. She used to send us to the Recreation Center after school to keep us off streets.
Not only has the Center been important for my family but it is embodied in every person that lives in our community. As an Italian neighborhood, we hold our annual Italian party there and it is not only to celebrate our roots, but we use this festivity as a way to raise money to our local school library and to buy instruments to the music center.
Terminating the Recreation Center will bring many negative effects not only in our neighborhood but for the whole city. Our children will have nowhere to go after school and will certainly be easier for the gangs to recruit them. Also, our Italian heritage that is so important to us will fade and will not be passed along to future generations as we try with our Italian party. I would like to suggest that we raise the money the city needs holding more festivities at the Center to keep its doors opened.
I thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mayara Fonseca
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61603375527 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53671082589 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57805907173 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5319061033 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175234202216 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755168748215 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489752365664 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099645784893 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413509978239 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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