some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Having a portion of such Informations is a essential for every part of the aspects however, few people argue that to sharing a extensive knowledge regarding scientific research ,business and the academic while other believe that some informations are crucial for own purpose which is not accessible to everyone.so this essay will provide some arguments below
To originate from , in some universities information is open to every student during thier research beacuse such significant knowledge should be accessible to every candidates which would be helpful in thier project . Moreover , such sort of intimation should be share to other volunteers who got a same goal to archive.for example if the information about pros and cons of the project which should discussable to each every opponents of the business where everyone could let them know about which project they are working on.
Furthermore, some parts of information is not shareable to every working individual.
So that is most seen in various scientific research if the some information is leaked out be any volunteer there would be devastating consequences of firing out of the job as well as business . So companies or industries keeps thier information in secret because they do not tend to notify other companies what sort speciality having in thier goods.for example a chicken Khurana is street food side corner ,it is widespread in every part of the India even people who are living in different states those are very enthusiastic to have a taste of thier chicken and numerous people has attempted to know about thier special recipe but they never tend to leak out thier unique speciality of thier chickens if they do it thier business would be halt forever.
To sum up with , totally depend on person to person to share the such information. Which is required alot but such sort of information is ought to be in secret and it should not be discuss to everyone because there would be a sudden dangers of our business or research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for example, sort of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06626506024 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84523780028 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515060240964 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 20.2975951904 409% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.629866219 49.4020404114 374% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 420.5 106.682146367 394% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.0 20.7667163134 400% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.5 7.06120827912 418% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239048753018 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160449710287 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793686471257 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156009691325 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639054062548 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.9 13.0946893788 335% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.77 50.2224549098 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 11.3001002004 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.31 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 10.1190380762 348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 36.0 10.7795591182 334% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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