Many people say that online games should be banned. Do you agree with this idea
These past few decades have seen an upsurge in the popularity of online games among adolescence worldwide. It is often claimed that playing computer games ought to be forbidden on the grounds that these games have no permanent value to them and have adverse impact on their physical as well as mental development. Nevertheless, I wholeheartedly believe that there should not be a veto on creating new online games along with playing it due to its potential benefits
First and foremost, it is undeniable that playing video games play an integral part in improving the cognitive development of children. Initially, video games that focus on puzzles is clearly proved to be capable of practicing critical thinking for players and multitasking. By having to work on many complicated problems for a short time, they are required to make logical connections between certain actions along with understand the influence of their choices to the overall experience as well as enhance problem solving skill. Besides that, children can learn to be an excellent team worker when they have to fulfill their obligation in accordance with their team to finish a difficult task, which will definitely come in handy for future jobs..
Furthermore, the idea that playing video games is a waste of time and money is not for those with e-sport scholarships. In some universities in USA, multiplayer video games play competitively, often with spectators, and they have become a gate way to college scholarship money. Students can organize themselves and create their own opportunities for gaming. Therefore, being adept at play online games will be a unique capacity to enroll in special departments of universities.
To sum up, I totally argue that students accompanied by adults can reap a lot of benefits from playing video games which can help them to follow their own passion and develop their talents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16938110749 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87838424521 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4742089877 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.272727273 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185747427568 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779348562963 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466338811618 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115345695922 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609244010971 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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