Essay topics:
Boys' and girls cultural and leisure activities
These pie charts shows the conclusion of a survey of boys' and girls' activities. It can be seen that there are many differences between both sex prefrences.
The first chart illustrates that boys'd rather play computer games than other activities by 34 percent. Playing basketball is the second popular leisure works among boys by 26 percent. Soccer participation by 17% follows after basketball. Then skateboarding and listening to music are less preferable among boys. Reading by 2% is the least cultural activities that boys participate in.
The second pie chart shows that the top rate of fa...
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Sentence: It can be seen that there are many differences between both sex prefrences.
Error: prefrences Suggestion: preferences
Sentence: It's noticable that reading which doesn't have enogh boy participation, is the second rated activity for girls.
Error: noticable Suggestion: noticeable
Error: enogh Suggestion: enough
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 210 200
No. of Characters: 1030 1000
No. of Different Words: 119 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.807 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.905 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.687 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.668 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.561 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4