Boys and girls cultural and leisure activities

Grammar and spelling errors:
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The charts illustrate the percentage of ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...llustrate the percentage of 9 different kind of boys and girls free time activities....
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...f boys and girls free time activities. Overall, in both charts girls and boys h...
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Suggestion: Male
...ening to music, computer games, reading.Male children spend their time to play compu...
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Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dance'?
Suggestion: dance
...r games while female children prefer to dancing in their leisure time.Boys spend less t...
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Suggestion: Boys
...prefer to dancing in their leisure time.Boys spend less time to reading, whereas gir...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ading, whereas girls listening to music rarely. In terms of computer games, boys ex...
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...ereas girls listening to music rarely. In terms of computer games, boys expand ...
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...r listening to music 10% respectively. Boys the second popular activity is bask...
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Suggestion: Third
...r scateboarding, gymnastic respectively.Third popular sport activity for male gender ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'second', 'third', 'whereas', 'while', 'kind of']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.32972972973 0.268076937826 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.12972972973 0.116061578633 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0918918918919 0.0759168565197 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0216216216216 0.0366838410393 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0216216216216 0.0131127313244 165% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102702702703 0.155750635184 66% => OK
Participles: 0.0324324324324 0.0379272487307 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9001201252 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0378378378378 0.0210936926555 179% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0594594594595 0.0948980150116 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0108108108108 0.00967000014798 112% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 951.0 1161.00487805 82% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.9 78% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21568627451 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352941176471 0.337110787985 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261437908497 0.247514529752 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18954248366 0.171178102325 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117647058824 0.112407865282 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9001201252 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.546246751206 93% => OK
Word variations: 40.0226038996 49.3433353143 81% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8571428571 23.0094962315 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1405174418 42.9750493124 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.857142857 135.714022679 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 23.0094962315 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.689975730869 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.48048780488 675% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.0009337068 47.7609492067 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.6875 2.94281807926 91% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248819713211 0.418131533498 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.167375830642 0.181151798455 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.133429033638 0.0850326197045 157% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.804954183064 0.706616315825 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.230040254579 0.157042692854 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134158709207 0.228904883108 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827289165511 0.108899403657 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.295859757533 0.367819155151 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0738788789206 0.0812612215331 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162586109003 0.316326947829 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614457939605 0.0921553760075 67% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.5 Out of 9