Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
In today’s world,the question of which place is more preferable for living whether a small town or a big city has become a controversial topic.In my opinion to live in a big city is beneficial in myriad of ways.I feel this way for two reasons which i will illustrate in the following essay.
To begin with,living in a big city is always advantageous as it provides more opportunities whether in education or in job which people find difficulties to get when they live in a small town.In a big city there are multifarious of multinational companies and other small and medium companies which provide job opportunities and numerous numbers of private and government colleges and schools which allow the students extraordinary facilities for learning.My own experience is a good example of this. Few years ago, I came into the city Kolkata for my baccalaureate study from a small town where i completed my high school degree.In my high school students were taught in conventional way which was quite tedious but the schools in big cities follow dynamic approach to teach their students by showing videos which is captivating.My niece reads in a convent school which is in Kolkata.sometimes we discuss some science topics and their basic concepts and what i have noticed that her concepts are vivid and and she always says that learning in the classes is more fascinating as teacher shows them video while teaching.
Secondly,big city is always a safer place to live as it is crowded;and easy transportation enable us to go anywhere at any time in the city.let me cite an example to shed a light on this statement.i have a vivid example to demonstrate this statement.When i was a college freshman,i used to go to place for a tuition which was 25 kilometer away from my living place.I got back to home around 10 pm from that tuition.As the city is crowded and transportation is always available i found no difficulty to return.In contrary, during my school days i went for a tuition,though it was only one block away from my home my father always took me to that place as the place was less crowded.
In conclusion , we can say that it is always better to live in a big city as it not only does offer good job opportunities and better learning but also does allow to live in a safer place.
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also, but, if, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02429307316 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5175 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 80.0 20.1344086022 397% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.826481194 48.9658058833 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 380.0 100.406767564 378% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 80.0 20.6045352989 388% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.45110844103 349% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.5376344086 686% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236064718296 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147204984117 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720738761602 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163592673057 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653686707573 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.9 11.7677419355 348% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.26 58.1214874552 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 10.1575268817 328% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.01818996416 135% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.0 10.0537634409 338% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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