Technology is a boon for human being. Now these days, technology has advanced in the field of banking, shopping and business transactions, by the introduction of online banking system. In this essay, pros and cons of these activities will be discussed.
To begin with, credit and debit cards can be used to purchase anything quickly rather than rushing to the market that consumes precious time. Moreover, that ample time can be utilised for family and other personality boosting activities. Furthermore, standing in queues is a body ache experience, especially for the elders during the banking procedure. Which has been swept away to a large extent. The problem of pollution and traffic congestion is also being resloved by online shopping.
On the contrary, cyber crime and online fraud is emerging out, owing to online banking, robbing a huge amount of money in just a few minutes without even came into notice by the victim. Furthermore, the people are decieved by online shopping websites, showing a good quality product but delivering a bad quality product of similar appearance. The people of society who do not have enough knowledge about online banking or shopping can easily befooled. It can not be denied that, the interpersonal growth of people is deteriorated, that is caused by lack of face to face interaction.
In conclusion, banking, shopping and business transactions seems to be a blessing for the society and individual, however, it should be upgraded with more security and privacy.
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Some people agree, some others disagree. Discuss both view. 56
- People can perform everyday tasks such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions without meeting other people face to face What are the effects of this on individual and society as a whole 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he elders during the banking procedure. Which has been swept away to a large extent. ...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'befool'
Suggestion: befool
...t online banking or shopping can easily befooled. It can not be denied that, the interpe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20491803279 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85875271381 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627049180328 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2898619741 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202171733995 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632587504491 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067165379397 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105180506217 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621755439833 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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