Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A teacher is well responsible for the students academic performance. if they are not very passionate about their job, they will just work for the salary. this is present case in the running world. Therefore, I strongly agree with the statement and illustrate with two examples.
To begin with, in previous decades, people used to treat their teachers as gods and have great gratitude towards them. Slowly as the world is changing, the bond between them is quite decreasing. most of the teachers currently are not being passionate about their work. As teaching is an easy way to earn money, people are more focusing on that career. For instance, as we are seeing in most of the colleges, they are not teaching students and being more lenient about giving marks, if so they can't be questioned by the students or any other. so they should meet up with some rules so that they can either be focusing on their job or just leave it. it should be done with responsibility and for those who are really capable of doing it.
I argue that this is not the case for all the students. there are some professors who are really interested in their work and try to improve students by sharing their knowledge. they can teach students to be more practical and help them to be successful in their career. if we put the rule, we just can't blame either teacher or students. it depends on the caring of the teacher towards children or the interest of a student towards studies.
To conclude, we can say that students are the pillars of tomorrows future but only teachers can make it happen. As given in the statement the rule can be good in some cases and may not be good to some extremes. but the way most of the students are being taught should change in the education system. if this happens there will not be any need to put on rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53636363636 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40863346143 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475757575758 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6053916819 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.85 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221815013124 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752895645017 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059261585871 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146283874318 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217487106096 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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