People spend too much time on their work rather than on their personal life and experience time shortage. What problems will it cause them? What could be the possible solutions?
Maintaining a healthy work-life balance has been a predominant problem to our modern workforce. For most people, to stay competitive in the work environment and spending enough time with family remains a big ask. This essay will discuss, the various problems that modern workforce face due to unhealthy work-life balance and throw some possible suggestions to overcome this burning issue.
Firstly, these days every employee is facing huge work pressure due to the competition prevailing in the work environment. Every employee must meet their annual goals set by his employer to stay employed in the company. As a result, one ought to spend beyond his time and energy to fulfill his commitments towards his employer. Due to this, people cannot afford enough time with his family members and apparently affects personal relationships.
Moreover, there are several health risks associated with improper work-life balance. Not only their personal relationships are under stake, but also their ability to perform well in work is severely impaired due to their health. People who spend more time on work are prone to get affected by diseases such as high blood pressure, heart diseases and obesity during their young age as compared to those people who manage their time well between work and personal life. Hence, it is apparent that there is a high health risk involved due to irregular work-life balance.
In conclusion, work-life management is growing to become astonishingly important among the modern workforce. In my opinion, although modern workforce cannot run away from the pertinent competition prevailing over their Job, one must deliberately spend or balance their time with their family and do their personal welfare activities such as Yoga or physical workouts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7131106479 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2220980043 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306377535847 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106029626621 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630317514097 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187930594809 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520464936122 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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