Write a letter to a friend who has visited you a few days ago and has left his mobile at your place. Please mention
- The visit he paid you and how you felt about it.
- How you found his/her cell phone at your place.
- Suggest ways of sending it back to him/her.
Dear Sarah,
I hope this letter find you well. Last weekend was one of the best weekend ever I had. Talking about such memorable days causes I feel happy.
Buddy, last day, when I was cleaning dining room I found you cell phone. It was fallen out under sofa. I think it is my little cat’s fault. Please forgive me for having such crazy cat. You remember how much she liked to play with your cell phone.
My husband is going to go to Tehran on next Monday because of his job. I think it is good idea that he bring your cell phone. However, if you need it earlier, I can post it as soon as possible.
Please do not hesitated and call me or email if this plane if suitable for you. My husband and I will be happy to be your host on your next trip.
With love,
Mari.
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Sentence: I think it is good idea that he bring your cell phone.
Description: The fragment he bring your is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace bring with verb, past tense
Please do not hesitated and call me or email if this plane if suitable for you.
Please do not hesitate and call me or email if this plane if suitable for you.
flaws:
No. of Words: 147 200
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 147 200
No. of Characters: 565 1000
No. of Different Words: 101 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.482 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.844 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.813 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 25 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 15 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 6 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 2 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.308 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.267 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.364 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.129 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4