Some people think that certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
To what extent do you agree?
Crime is incessantly augmenting every now and then that it is nowadays, mandatory to put convicted people behind bars. However, some people think that, repercussion of harsh sentences is uncivilized for mild offenders; so, they must be compel to do social services for free. This essay uphold the notion to a greater extent because circumstances made people to do felony; but, brutal criminals should be given strict punishments to set an example for society.
The possible reason to support this notion is that sometimes situation make people to do crime. That is to say that, not all the criminals are born to commit crimes; albeit, some egregious situation patronize them to commit crimes. For example, a teenager steals food from someone to satisfy appetite of starving mother should not be counted as a crime and should be rehabilitated. Moreover, when such criminals are expelled from the society, they would feel isolated which in turn again motivates them to commit crimes. Hence, the argument is substantiated that, some criminal should be indulged in community services.
On the contrary, serious felony should not be ignored and should be given strict punishments to set an example for community. This is because, brutal culprits, who commit premedicayed crime such as murder or rape should not be compelled to do community services, instead should be imprisoned to create fear amidst other criminals. To illustrate, when North Korea gave capital punishment to one of the murderers,the crime ration has drastically decreased in no time. In addition to that, background of the criminals as well as motif of the crime should be checked because such criminals can cause perilous situation, if they are given a second chance. Therefore, not all the offenders should be rehabilitated but some should be imprisoned.
In conclusion, mild-offenders and juveniles should be made to do unpaid services; but, brutal criminals should not be neglected. Furthermore, I agree with the notion that, free social services is the best way to change a criminal into a responsible citizen and it is recommended that, government should take serious steps before such situations to do crimes arise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
Crime is incessantly augmenting every now and then that it is nowadays, mandatory to put c...
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Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'upholds'.
Suggestion: upholds
...do social services for free. This essay uphold the notion to a greater extent because ...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...pital punishment to one of the murderers,the crime ration has drastically decreased ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89938920116 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547008547009 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4125393082 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7333333333 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343547058162 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129808788415 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831248794007 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227644048124 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423394996068 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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