You would like to learn a foreign language and there is a teacher close to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher about the following:
Explain how did you find out about the teacher?
Reasons why you want to learn this language?
Ask how you can meet and talk about the possibility of you learning this language?
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my interest in learning the French language under your guidance and supervision. One of my office colleague, who is you ex-student have suggested your tutorship and explained to me your teaching methodologies. I am impressed with his eloquent speaking and understanding of a foreign language in a short period.
Let me explain to you that why I need to learn this language. My immigration application for Canada has been approved recently and I will be relocating in a couple of months. As I have heard that the French language is the second official mode of communication in Canada and it has become imperative for me to at least know the elementary level. Furthermore, learning this language will increase the prospects of getting a better job in a competitive environment of Canada and will be instrumental in a smooth settlement.
I would like to meet yourself to discuss the learning plan. Fortunately, I live nearby to your house and can pass-by at your convenient time.
Thanking you in anticipation
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...sted your tutorship and explained to me your teaching methodologies. I am impressed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, second, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02285714286 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17416098508 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1584986464 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22818998894 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988433848062 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793541195236 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147864832862 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377573807068 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.