Economic development is an important factor to measure a country’s success. But some people think there should be some other factors to be considered. What are these factors? And among them which one is more important than others.
Over sixty-years ago after the World War II, the advancement of industry became apparent things, many inventions appear to develop and assist human needs. The inventions are not only technologies but also the economic advancement. Therefore, the standardization of achieve in the system of government is relate to economic growth. Conversely, some people believe that the economic growth is only particular factor to measure the success of state. This essay would examine the factors to measure the performance of the country.
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Sentence: Therefore, the standardization of achieve in the system of government is relate to economic growth.
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the high growth of economic could beat the level of poverty.
the high growth of economy could beat the level of poverty.
Sentence: It is essential the wealth without happy only fake of development.
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