The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
The bar chart gives information about the total of imprisonment in five states from 1930 until 1980. It is measured in total of prisoners. In general, it can be seen that Great Britain obtained a dramatic growth while the other countries got the different oscillation.
Based on the data, Great Britain rising 55 persons that had undermost incarceration number in 1930 and 1940. It owed same rate with Australia and New Zealand in 1970 that was 65 prisoners. Unfortunately, it rose until 85 detainees in 1980.
On the other hand, New Zealand carried the supreme fluctuation with the lowest section in 1950 and highest part in 1930. While the total peak of prisoners was the United State in 1980 that was 135 inmates. After New Zealand, Canada in 1930 was the second paramount of custody amount that was 120 captives. It was further down 15 inmates than United Stated in 1980 and more elevate 20 hostages than New Zealand in 1930.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ction in 1950 and highest part in 1930. While the total peak of prisoners was the Uni...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nited Stated in 1980 and more elevate 20 hostages than New Zealand in 1930.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82608695652 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55502313186 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614906832298 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2575653587 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143430659584 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557799032693 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541126545682 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994992332011 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041604024339 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.