These days, there is an ongoing debate among parents about the behaviour of children. While is it possible to claim that parents are responsible for children’s behaviour; however, some parents believe the opposite. In this essay, both positive and negative impacts will be discussed followed by a rational conclusion.
There are many reasons why parents take responsibility for children’s behaviour. One of them is that they played a major part in raising their children, but there are some instances where the children are raised by their grandparents. It should also need to take into account that upbringing a child cannot be done single-handedly. With respect to leading research conducted at Harvard University, it is revealed parents have more obligation on the upbringing of their children, but many parents believe responsibility should be divided equally.
Nevertheless, those who disagree with the argument, believe it is children’s duty to differentiate between right and wrong. According to an academic journal which focuses on parenting, it is shown that children need help in distinguishing ethics at early ages. As per the research, neither parents nor children seem to have agreed with its discovery. It is advisable parents to engage actively in the upbringing of children, or else it may contribute to increasing the crime rate and violence in the future.
While there are strong arguments to support both sides of the case, but my opinion is that parents need to take full responsibility for the behaviour of children. I would strongly suggest potential parents plan ahead because raising a child properly requires heaps of help and patience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41064638783 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12536426769 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9847107573 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259544715259 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102040290607 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779510036774 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166350181624 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195781486167 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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