You booked a two-week holiday to Sydney with Fly-by-Night Travel. You are not happy with the holiday – the flight was delayed, the hotel was noisy, and so on.
Write to Fly-by-Night Travel to:
• Complain about the holiday.
• Give details about the problems.
• Request some compensation or a refund.
Dear Kristy,
I am Arti Abbey. Hope you are doing well. I am very disappointed to writing this letter. I booked a two-week holiday for Sydney with Fly-by-Night travel from 1 december to 15 december, my booking is was 1234321.I was excited when I booked the tour, unfortunately it was terrible experience, and I faced lots of issue in this journey.
Mr. Ajay was our contact person, as I got the details about the tour but unfortunately flight delayed 3 hours and I did not get any message or call about the delayed time. Although that was not your fault. However, we reached hotel but room was not clean. I called to Ajay for it. He assured me that, I will get the room in 10 minutes but I waited 30 minutes at reception after made lots of call we got the room. Additionally hotel was very noisy; we had never taken a good sleep in that hotel. I am not happy with your services. As Fly-by-Night travel agency have good review related to customers’ satisfaction and their service, regretful it was bad experience. Therefore, I want my whole money back
I would endorse if you refund the whole amount. if you have any query please contact me at my mentioned number.
Yours Faithfully,
Arti.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...m 1 december to 15 december, my booking is was 1234321.I was excited when I booked...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... december to 15 december, my booking is was 1234321.I was excited when I booked the...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... 15 december, my booking is was 1234321.I was excited when I booked the tour, unf...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... 15 december, my booking is was 1234321.I was excited when I booked the tour, unf...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...message or call about the delayed time. Although that was not your fault. However, we re...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...fter made lots of call we got the room. Additionally hotel was very noisy; we had never take...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...endorse if you refund the whole amount. if you have any query please contact me at...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...endorse if you refund the whole amount. if you have any query please contact me at...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67592592593 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75806275325 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643518518519 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0493986226 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321108021838 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763546603283 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860185117857 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191692016085 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976100840148 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.