Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
• Thank them for the photos and for the holiday.
• Explain why you didn’t write earlier.
• Invite them to come and stay with you.
Hope you all are doing great, I am glad to inform you that yesterday I received photos that you sent earlier, I was little surprised to find some great photos. I had a great time with you people on our last overseas Sydney holiday.
It was amazing tour with you and I want to say a great thanks to all of you. When planning was going on, I never thought that it would be my memorial holiday in Sydney. Fortunately, I got the opportunity we explored Sydney and made some footprints. It was lovely time, which we spent together. A most adventures activity was skydiving which we did, without you people I never imagined. It was wonderful experience. I am writing this to bit late because due to long holiday, it was hard work pressure on me. The measure point was project delivery date had preponderated so I was not able to discuss you. I am happy to invite you to come at my home in Noida with your family, my family also want to meet you and stay will stay here at my home. We will also make some holiday tour in India as well. There are plethora of historical places where we can go together.
So please share your plan with me when you will come here. I will be waiting for your response.
With Love,
Soniya.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...er imagined. It was wonderful experience .I am writing this to bit late because du...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... imagined. It was wonderful experience .I am writing this to bit late because due...
^
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...waiting for your response. With Love, Soniya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33624454148 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36021252306 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602620087336 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6599993938 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330049544957 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10685087255 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741055803223 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239263115908 0.12726935374 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453028064998 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.