How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause.

In the competitive professional world, everyone tends to work hard for their life-sustaining. When peoples are spent their maximum times on their work-related than personal life will cause health and mental problems. I will discuss more that importance on this essay with my points and examples.

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 31.9359605911 16% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 252.0 1207.87684729 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 46.0 242.827586207 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47826086957 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.60429068714 3.92707691288 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05494733402 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 41.0 139.433497537 29% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.891304347826 0.580463131201 154% => OK
syllable_count: 73.8 379.143842365 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6551724138 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.2635033757 50.4703680194 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243118002761 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138730151427 0.0925447433944 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109650877838 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243118002761 0.151781067708 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 55.0591133005 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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