In the competitive professional world, everyone tends to work hard for their life-sustaining. When peoples are spent their maximum times on their work-related than personal life will cause health and mental problems. I will discuss more that importance on this essay with my points and examples.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Manisha Verma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 31.9359605911 16% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 252.0 1207.87684729 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 46.0 242.827586207 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47826086957 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.60429068714 3.92707691288 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05494733402 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 41.0 139.433497537 29% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.891304347826 0.580463131201 154% => OK
syllable_count: 73.8 379.143842365 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6551724138 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.2635033757 50.4703680194 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243118002761 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138730151427 0.0925447433944 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109650877838 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243118002761 0.151781067708 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 55.0591133005 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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